Black Poetry : Always Take The Initiative

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  1. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can, all too clearly,
    remember a time
    when I had
    taken the initiative
    and brought it
    (well, more like
    seduced it
    into wanting to
    come)
    ~all the way~ home,
    with me.
    Once there,
    I had taken that
    initiative,
    yet again,
    uncovered it
    (and its surroundings,
    of course)
    and played -approximately-
    4 games,
    with it; you know,
    so as to keep it's adrenaline
    r(eadily g)ushing
    before I formally
    introduced it
    to the pearl
    on my tongue,
    and allowed it
    to venture into
    (and out of) the place
    between the walls
    just beneath it.
    In return,
    the initiative
    had taken me
    to screaming heights,
    unreachable (for a lady)
    by any other means,
    than the initiative itself.
    That day I came
    and went back
    to receive more
    of the initiative,
    because having it
    made me feel all tingly,
    inside.
    Presently,
    another quite attractive
    initiative has,
    well... presented itself
    to me
    via poetry,
    and I was just wondering
    whether or not I should...
     
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    Go ahead and take the initiative....Cause I'll be right there with you....:wink:
     
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    Maple.


    ...i was g'on try to get some work done today...
    & stay away from the poetry page... but i had
    to take the initiative... & tell you that you are
    too too much lil sistah poet!! :lol:

    this is classic bad gurl you!! (& i'm tellin' mama) :D

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
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    nothing like a little initiative...

    in well placed situations...to increase the level of heat...to take you to new heights...to

    GET YOUR GROOOOOVE ON....hmmm.

    sistah of the extreme style...nice to meet ya.:)
     
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    You must, you must. Nice.

    BE
     
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    Girl, take it and run...

    Maple, you have just really been bum rushing the page
    these days. I'm too impressed. If the initiative has got you
    like this, there's no reason to let it go now. Write on, sistah!!!!
     
  7. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was just...

    ...trying to see if
    I could do even, a
    little bit of justice,
    to that
    extreme family
    name...:D

    Bish- I knew I could count on you.

    The Bestest Big Sister in The Whole Wide World- (did that convince you not to tell :confused: :lol: ) stay away? No, don't stay away, what would we (and I really mean that in the 'I' sense of the word 'cause I'm a selfish lil sistah) do without you??? :heart:

    Baller- Was it me who said you even 'speak' in verse when you're not trying to? :blush: Is it really nice to meet me?

    BE- Well, thank you, all I needed was the okay, pa...:D Thanx for the read...

    Dani- Awww gosh girlie, you gone get a sistah's head all big, nah, really though I appreciate your reading me more than you know, ma...:jumping:
     
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    take the initiative gurl

    this "piece" of initiative is...mmmm mmmm good!! Maply x-treme!! YOu deserve the name!!!!

    I could learn a thing or two about initiative!!!



    :toast:
     
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    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss Lady Dancer...

    ...I certainly don't
    wanna cross you
    (just peeped ya piece)
    so, I'm gonna thank you
    from the bottom of
    my heart :heart: for givin'
    me the okey-doke,
    'cause ya know that initiative
    is really seeming, x-tremely, pleasing
    ya know what I mean? :D
     
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    Sweet Sticky~

    I think you should gone head and break it down for a brutha...lol

    you left me hangin on that last initiative and you know dat aint right....lol

    But then again I guess you generally have that effect on people huh? leavin em' hangin on for the next line...

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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