Black Poetry : Always in a fight

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jul 10, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good is what I feel right now.
    Evil is how I feel some how.
    Fighting emotions, time stand still.
    Who will win, this simple man’s will?
    I fight, inside, I think aloud.
    I’m lonely walking.
    I’m in a crowd.
    I look up, and pray, I look down and curse.
    I’m loosing the battle on this earth.
    Don’t stop the struggle.

    Man.

    The battle rages on.
    Everyday.
    No way I can take no more.
    I can end this.
    I decide.
    I think I must have some dignity.
    Hope and pride.
    Don’t settle for any things that come along.
    Your music is your soul song.
    Since you were born.
    The battle rages on.
    I’m on top and underneath.
    Winning isn’t easy.
    Neither is defeat.
    If you decide to fight.
    If you have the power to win.
    Fight evil, so easy to carry his whim.
    Good is what I feel right now.
    Another day won. Tomorrow some how.
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good over evil..and you have won, rest for tomorrow...wonderful..strong....
    Peace
     
  3. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this. One's own personal battle. Very deeply felt.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely pose dis reminds me of something
    wow!
     
  5. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, yes, yes....
    tomorrow some how.....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte flow poet :toast:
     
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    Self battle is brought to words .I like this.
     
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