Black Poetry : Always Forever

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Sep 2, 2001.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i love the way you eloquently
    put words in poetic motion
    kinetic force like johnson and
    johnson baby lotion

    your magic potion fills the
    realm of my heart from
    finish to start as i grasp hold
    of you like glue nailing the
    inside of a shopping cart

    we part but you always
    come back and win a new
    beginning never once
    considering our love ever
    ending

    in sending mixed signals
    time works for us mending

    with love still pending
    like the face of a note by
    an issuer lending

    intending to start anew
    spending time with you

    always forever in
    love with you :kiss:


    apt copyright all rights reserved 2001
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd...now, you know, i'm lovin' this love piece. it's quite nyce, dear poetess.

    ~~~letlovepoetryflo~~~
     
  3. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    this was a free-style flow as u can C

    i'm having fun :)

    pd
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD

    I felt the free-style of this one ...LOVE freestyle ! this one reminded me why..tyght one here...from one who knows freestyle !!

    peace
    g-man
     
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