Black Poetry : Always and Forever

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Oct 12, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To savor the flavor

    Sweet rendezvous

    Let's cherish

    The business

    Of loving too

    Expressing joy

    In familiar ways

    Spending our days

    In love's Milky Way

    Bodacious player

    Soothsayer supreme

    One to another...

    Say you agree

    Immortalize me

    O' family tree

    I need you to live

    Thus famously ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari :number1:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once u cascade into da milky way there's hot compassion made
    to sweet chocolate milk u better watch out ladies be in line to
    try u ! tyte butter smooth flow 1poet
     
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    this was laid smooth enjoyed the flow
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for sharing this piece poet.
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Godssoulja. ;)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    still loving this vibe....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece sort of goes around the bend and taps ya on the shoulder. Flow on brotha.
     
  8. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow.

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    Really enjoyed the flow and rhyme of this poem. It moved swift and soothing like a haunting melody of music. Great Work!

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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice work poet, flow on :geek:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We be almost famous... thanks family.
     
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