Black Poetry : Although You Are With Someone Else.... (a sad one)

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Although you are with someone else
    I want to have my say
    Without invading your domain
    or scaring you away
    I respect the choice you made
    And all that you decide
    But I want you to know
    I want you by my side
    As a lake deep in the woods
    Awaits a cool, fresh breeze
    I will wait, a patient eye,
    While you do as you please...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hearing and feeling u here
    let it be heard say the word
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    healing comes from understanding...you understand here clearly and i send a tulip of comfort from the meadow...

    tight scribe poet...

    one.
     
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    I've been there before .... I feel your poem
     
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    SNIFFFF, SIGHHHHHH. Okay just don't wait in vain... This was wonderful...


    I'm just sayin...
     
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    thats a long hard wait but only u know if it is worth it trust your heart friend ....... love is... its not chosen doesn't just happen and all we can do is accept ... something else isn't
     
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    I FELT THE NEED TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK AND I UNDERSTAND WHY, YOUR PHYSIQUE IN THE FORM OF WORD, IS VERY PLEASING TO MY HEART'S EYE. SPEAK ON...BE FREE.

    LYRICGENIOUS
     
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    tight poem serenti........ i feel u......much love :)
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all family, i luv that ya'll luved my poem, i am a strong women so i am no longer waiting for something that will not come, sometimes you gotta say f it. :) keep flowin you all and i promise i will too.
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh and one mo thing look out for parts 2 3 and 4 to this poem the saga continues lol :) still flowin peace and blessins
     
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