Black Poetry : ALTAR MY HEART

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    Looking deep in the depth of my soul
    to a point of no return which been mold
    trying to cross bridges someone burn
    cryin to the lord mercy one yearn

    Upon da symbol of love
    I've searched and already found
    she was beside me yet in another town
    my heart flutter deeper for survival
    awaiting still my lovers arrival

    Da passion of my completion looms
    as my nudeness reverse da moment
    of nakeness inside these temporary desires
    she exists within my anxious memories
    at da altar of temptation where desires vow

    my hearts devotion beats and a love cry
    layin da kiss of pure modesty wit noble truth
    tainted honesty my spirit enters hers as she of mines
    I knew the elegants of such beauty
    was made from da heaven's
    we stood at this temple for love
    :hearts1::luv::love::luv::hearts1:
     
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    Very elegantly written!
     
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    Brother Poet $$RICH$$,

    Beautifully written. The subject's heart really shines through. I love the "altar" and wedding feel that runs throughout the background of the piece. Lovely read. Thanks for sharing.
     
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    Sometime what one looks for is right beside you awaiting the YES......thank you dear

    hey
    candee you know the heart moves in ways we sometime can't express with words
    but i try my best to capture it from within ......thank yuou sister
     
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    cheers.....:toast:
     
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    the way hearts are altered in the mist of it all ......keeps me scrappin
     
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    Hold on to what little birdie chirped to you. She did not lie.
    Destiny...


    (smile)
     
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    Thank you and I believe ......
     
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    As do I.

    (smile)
     
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