Black Poetry : .Alright.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Oct 23, 2008.

  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    glad it wasn't me .....this was on point and to da facts sis u bust the bubble fo real
     
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    Wow way to lyrical get them told. You pen was definitely on fire. Like Bro. $Rich$ I am just gald it wasn't pointed at me my sister.
     
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    It's what you would do if he was worth the effort, seems like he was too fake to even break a sweat over him. Well written piece, and the alliteration was off the hook poetess.
     
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    Guuuurl....That brotha betta watch out.... chin checkLOL.....I was feelin this flo triniti....now give us some more!!!

    But like I always think to myself...it's "quality" flows, vs. "quanity" flows....and this defintley speaks quality.
     
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    my sistah...

    i started to flow with this from (his) perspective...but i didn't know how you would have taken it.:) ONLY IN FUN. but the feeling is gone now. anyway, nice as always. love the way you got crazy on a brutha...without losing your womanliness. OTHERS SHOULD LEARN THAT YOU DON'T HAVE TO FORGET YOU'RE A WOMAN...IN ORDER TO GET YOUR POINT ACROSS.

    THANKS for that.

    aand the river flows.
     
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    I love the way you delivered this one
    You mostly certainly let dude know about himself in a cool lyrical way
    Excellent job triniti24
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol Never you brother Rich lol
    Yes yes :thinking: I was trying to push this one to the next page by responding immediately after posting but um
    nothing gets past you lol
    :read:
    Thank u shug for the read :) I know its never gon be you lol I dont think you have a mean bone in your body :)

    Thank you sister :)
    Coming from a talented poetess such as yourself.
    I am flattered & humbled :) :read:

    Most definitely sister :read:
    Its always a trip to see someones true colors come to light.
    I look forward to your feedback sister :) Thank you :)

    Coming from our resident Poet of the Week :blush:
    I couldnt be more flattered :)
    Thank you so much sister :read:

    Ohhhhh no no nooooooo Brother Baller I LOVEEEE a challenge hehehe :read:
    Just please know what youre getting into LOL (just ask J'hiah & Khasm LOL)
    I do love poetic flowbacks its what forces the mental cogs to turn, wouldnt you agree brother :)
    And of course... woman first ;) I can get hood if I have too but again... no need :cool: ;)
    Thank you so much for the read my brother :)


    Thank you sister! :) Albeit a part of me wanted to PHYSICALLY express my annoyance LOL gotta keep it classy ;)
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um well alright

    dang, i was thinking man get your order of protection now
    that's domestic violence man lol:yesno:

    you mean the Amani wasn't legit?:SuN018:

    hahahahahahahhahahahahahahaha

    i thinking the same ***** please in my mind even before i got to that line
    lol


    see that's wrong talking all that smack and calling for help

    lol i said that with a smile ok

    i thinking somebody came with alot of hot air couldn't back it

    and you had to put it down

    YOU'RE NOT HAVING IT!

    and i'm feeling you
     
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    "I’d chin check your disrespect" Love it!



    I like how you let him know, up front
    that you could get physical, but took the high road
    and allowed the lady to step up to the plate and put him in his place
    I suppose he’s somewhere licking his wounds.

    Trinti, thanks. I always get into your flows

    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco :heart:
     
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