Black Poetry : ALREADY COMPLETE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cursed heart, Jan 15, 2006.

  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ALREADY COMPLETE



    I never thought it mattered much when I cried alone
    Until you came and put my tears on your throne
    You whispered with the angels about the secrets of my soul
    So you sent me a warm river of faith for my blessings to float

    You said if I ever thought my heart went unnoticed just ask
    And I’ll remind you of the times you shared your smile with the hurt and lonely
    The times your laughter made a homeless spirit acknowledge me
    The times you emptied your heart to inspire their dreams

    I remember when you gave so much of yourself, you forgot how to feel free
    When you wanted love but they only took what their eyes could see
    Cause their souls weren’t deep enough to appreciate your beauty
    When trust seemed like a trivia question so you prayed to me for an answer

    You said “ God” why is it so hard for people to love me for me
    Why is my soul so pleasant and my heart so free?
    I know you made the ingredients for me
    Silent beauty
    Heart of Gold
    Mind of peace
    But yet, no one cares to see
    How come nobody compares to me?

    And I said you’re right my child
    Nobody compares to you because angles never repeat
    And I never make mistakes so don’t ever change
    And if the world is not ready for you
    It’s because you’re already complete
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this already complete keep up the good flows, flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes sister Yes
    My Chitown Queen
    Im loveing this sister
    Dont change a thang
    Love you for you
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Thank you Nevar and Tantrum,
    Much Love :kiss1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so divine feeling all of this
    the depth & warmth is complete
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Thanks Rich:kiss1:
     
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    WOW... very heart felt... thanks for sharin!!
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sister sonnee:kiss1:
     
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