Black Poetry : Alpha Bet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Aug 1, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once I found my way
    Made letters click

    I burned both ends
    Of the candle stick

    Lighting up hearts
    Til' daylight quit

    Smoked the front page
    Son here's a clip ~

    Feeling the way
    My keyboard spits

    Rhyming the sage
    With bad boy lips

    Sticking the man
    Who hedges bets

    Language we lost
    I'll resurrect...

    With a house call move
    I'm changing zips

    If it comes up lame
    Don't call in sic

    Cause it cost to much
    To make the trip

    So adjust your frank
    Old english kit

    The vernacular,
    A prime suspect

    If it's Black,
    Ya'll know it's coming back!


    Darryl Abdu Omari :geek:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up ! sho nuff coming back phat too ...
    tyte drop
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight
    i enjoyed it
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. SensualReality

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    oooh I'm ova here rockin' like I'm at a Diplomats concert....flow on poet you said RIZIGHT :deal:
     
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    Very nice piece, you flow with much style and creativty, thanks for the write and continue to write and I'll keep reading.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Had my head noddin to the pace of this piece. Very witty, I enjoyed this.
     
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    No one can do it like you Poet!

    Tyte vibing!
    Loving it!!!!
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many thanks, Bet!
     
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