Quiet Poetry Lounge : Along The Way

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sierra, Jun 14, 2003.

  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Along the way
    we love and lose.
    We leave and return
    only to turn around
    and runaway again.

    Along the way,
    we hurt and heal.
    We rise and fall.
    And, sometimes,
    we can't find our way
    out from under the pain.

    Along the way,
    we touch the hand
    of a stranger and
    let go of the hand
    of a friend, only
    to reach for that
    same hand again.

    Along the way,
    we lose parts
    of ourselves,
    and if we are
    fortunate, we'll
    come to understand
    the purpose of
    our existences
    before we leave
    the places we are in.
     
  2. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really like this piece & its message... flow on :)

    peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yesssss! indeed we forget & forgive get lost to be found
    alone da way self message is written ......well felt as posed
    let the gift of ya pen speaketh ...
    tyte
     
  4. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey NADIA,

    :thanks: for the read:

    I am so happy you liked my poem.

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  5. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Rich,

    Thanks so much for the read!!

    I am glad you thought well of my poem!! :jumping:

    Yes, we must find ourselves before we know where we are headed!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    SIERRA SHINES

    This is just about the most beautiful poem I have ever had the pleasure of experiencing!

    Our words propose marriage to the truth-

    1poetsought ~ :heart:
     
  7. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi 1Poet,

    WOW!! Honestly, this has to be the most nicest and kindest comments I have ever received for my writing!!

    I appreciate your thoughts!!

    Yes, our marriage of words have born truth and reality!!

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed so true
    these are the thing
    to do.
     
  9. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich,

    Truth and reality frees the soul, don't you think?

    All my best to you!!

    Thanks for stopping by again!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing.
    be
     
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