Black Poetry : Alone

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tru07, Mar 25, 2002.

  1. tru07

    tru07 Member MEMBER

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    Sittin at home
    Feelin alone
    Bags in my eyes
    Wantin to cry
    Tryin to hold them back
    But they have such a mighty pack
    Rollin down my face
    At such a slow face
    What's taht I'm feelin
    My heart's peelin but yet unspoken
    I live today as if it's my last
    Knowing yesterday was just the past
     
  2. Vyolet

    Vyolet Member MEMBER

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    I really like this poem it's beautiful. Since u've takin my place as the new member I will like to say wuz up and welcome. I hope u keep posting here well hmmm HOLLA!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i felt this deep down in my bones ........keep flowin' ya know!
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alone is a state of mind that can be conquered when you let that light shine. Moving it was.
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TRUE!!

    Believe Dat!!
    Nice flo Poet!!
     
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    this was deeply felt
    great post and welcome poet
     
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