Black Poetry : ...Alone...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jul 8, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just some stuff from my early days....


    alone in a dark room
    reminiscing of those treasured times with you
    pickin' up the phone i start to dial
    but hang up in the middle askin' "why?"

    the pain is too **** hard to describe
    the hurt is too **** hard to survive
    you ask me if i'm angry, i lie
    i cover up my pain to my surprise

    on my own alone, wishin' you were here
    i imaginin' that you, are holdin' me with care
    the darkness is so thick, that my pain is despair
    i only hope, i only wish that you were here...
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, LovelyGoldenOne, this flo is tyte
    Continute writin' with all yo might

    Love and Peace,
    Foxy.................

    P.S
    Oh, and you are still in my prayers
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot foxy:)
     
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    Your writing has evolved in it's depth but this was still tyte a prelude to all the wonderful pieces u give us now!
     
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    this is beautiful LovelyG..i can envision where you coming from...keep those strong thoughts..you are never alone
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet flow yet not alone
    forth i am near

    i like dis here........
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "You go alone but you are never alone"

    Tyte flow Lovely :)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody:D
     
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    Its a beautiful thing to go back and feel the place you were and then feel where you live now.... Its all wonderful expressions of your soul! I flowed with your images and envisoned it all with you great piece....

    AqueenPassing
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    Bless,
    Nice flow. I feel ya.
     
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