Black Poetry : Alone

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  1. Lahana Mysteria

    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "As I sit here alone staring into the sun,
    a rain of words leap and bound throughout this mind.

    Significant silence guides my heart into calm,
    no annoyances,
    no harsh realities,
    just me in this warm everchanging atmosphere.

    I love the oneness of being alone,though many can not understand it.
    Shivers of paranoia are posessed in the minds of the insecure.
    A craving to be engulfed in noise and chaos,permeates their own air of audacity.

    I love the feeling of not knowing what I am missing.
    This silence is just right for me..."
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i feel ya
    love my quiet moments
    my own space to allow my
    mental to roam so freely
    i feel dis coz i understand
    tyte
     
  3. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, how I miss the solitude that you speak of here. I don't get much "alone" time and it it sorely missed. Beautiful.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    being alone,
    is what makes life come to being.
    opening your eyes,
    to watch things you've never been seeing.
    it was so peaceful,
    to hear those words spoken.
    it takes no money,
    or any token.
    to get to a place,
    when war is of no more.
    laying in gardens of beautiful flowers,
    as you watch white doves soar.
    so yes i say,
    being alone sometimes,
    is nice.
    to trade reality for tranquility,
    i'd never think twice..............(really feelin it) [email protected]
     
  5. Lahana Mysteria

    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$....a quiet moment is the best thing

    LyrikalShe...I do hope that you get some "alone" time soon,it works wonders for your sanity

    lilcherry...if only the rest of the world cared to trade reality for tranquility

    Thanx for your words :)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful....i know the feelin' u had when u wrote this...
     
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    Like listening to a cold summer rain sitting by the window....I felt it and yet I put myself in that place. Thank You
     
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