Black Poetry : Alone

dojo54

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Alone I sit here thinking of the days
we once had. the years we were together
ment everything to me.

There was a time I thought that we would be
together forever.

Alone I sit here thinking about the feelings
I have for you, That will never go away.

Alone I sit here thinking some how some way If could take back the hurt That I have caused you. I would.

The day that you told me to leave will always be on my mind.
It's hard to wonder if you still think of me, or am I just another face you pass along the way.

Alone I sit here knowing I would give up everything to
have it all back.

But for now I'll sit here silently and alone thinking of the good times we had together.
 
nice piece i felt the emotion in this

i should not have been the first person to reply to this but you should know that the amount of replies dosent reflect how good your poem is good work poet and hope to read more of you soon. and if you typically write sad stuff and need sometehing to relate to thats the type of stuff i write about most of the time so check me out if you get the chance and let me know what you think
 

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