Black Poetry : Alone ( Without U )

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  1. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I will never forget all the moments we shared
    how much in love we were
    it was so rare
    and I really wanted this 2 last
    but you had other plans
    and I can't understand..

    You were in my life 4 quite some time
    and it was so comfortable; you being mine
    best of friends we were
    conversation was so great
    so why didn't we last
    I guess it's all in the past

    But still...I wish there was something I could do
    to get u 2 see that you were I all need
    and hopefully u'd change ur mind
    and come back 2 me


    I called you 2 see how u were
    but u wasn't home
    I guess lucky me
    but really it dissappointed me
    cause I finally worked up the nerve to call u
    I really been wondering
    what's been going on in ur life
    and if u even think about me
    or do u dispise me
    all because I told u that I was fed up
    with u not being here with me
    loving me tenderly...the kind of love I needed
    and all I needed was you

    U were in college in another city but the same state
    and when u were here I never seen u;not even one day
    so I thought I could express my feelings 2 you
    but instead u ended it and said that we were thru
    I have 2 respect that
    but I really want the love back~~~~
    the love that was better than life
    or me breathing
    cause life without u
    has complicated everything
    I'm so lonely without you

    Please come back
    Come Home:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    awwwwwwwww DIIMOND :cry:

    it certainly beez this way sometimes ... but this too shall pass

    very nice work

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweetie surely dis will pass
    many smile will come 2 last
    ya heart is broken
    yet will mend
    listen u can hold on
    and lean on a friend
    my arms r open

    don't cry !
     
  4. dojo54

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    you an I share the same feelings, dis was a fantastic read.
     
  5. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destee.. You are right gurl; This too shall pass. I was thinking of a love that ended not too long ago. It defintely beez that way
    sometimes....

    $RICH$.... thank you for the kind words.... you know I apprciate that.

    dojo54... Glad that you felt me on this friend. Thank you so much for the love!
     
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