Quiet Poetry Lounge : Alone With Thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CarrieMonet, Aug 10, 2004.

  1. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alone with thoughts of you
    Touching me
    Making my heart beat fast
    Wanting you
    All I need is you on top
    Pushing hard into me
    All I want is your body
    Becoming one with mine
    Let your thrusts
    Meet my thrusts
    Let my moans
    Meet your breaths

    Alone with thoughts of you
    Loving me
    Push faster up into my love
    Sedate me with your rhythms
    Tire me with your strong push
    Drain me and I'll drain you

    Alone with thoughts of you
    Holding me
    Carressing me and touching my hot skin
    Make me feel like your princess
    Make me feel like your beautiful lover.
    I love you and can't wait until I'm
    Not only alone with just thoughts of you.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done i like
     
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    tight write!!!!
     
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    Very passionate flow...
    Nice work!
     
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    You can just hear the passion
    in this piece!!!!!
    Sometimes those thoughts
    can just take you away!!!!!!!

    Keep em comming Sis!
    I Loved It!!!!!!!!!
     
  6. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you!
     
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    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can really relate. This was express with passion that I can feel. I like this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    had to up this sweet release from da sista......
    still feeling da depth she pose here
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooh, sensual..... Tight!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If this hadn't of been upped again, I wouldn't have realized that I didn't respond to this, thought I did. This was such a warm and sensual piece. Props to you on this poet.
     
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