Quiet Poetry Lounge : ALONE IN TYME

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Roaming the stilliness
    of tic & toc
    the stop of the clock
    i stand
    alone in tyme
    i walk through
    the face of an tunnel
    in silent no sound
    darkness before me
    dampness i feel
    i fear not the moment
    lonely
    i strain to see ahead
    my mental dewell
    on what i've passed
    and stumble on all i face
    beneath me is no end
    falling in to the future
    alone in tyme
     
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    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LOVE THIS!!!!
    It SEEMS sooo PERSONAL.
    the PLOT thickens.....
    (snaps)
    Diggin your style...
    MORE!!:toast:
     
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    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so deep, so smooth
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SUNkissed.......i am greatful for the wordz u bless me and i thank u i try my best to bring a good vibe .

    luvNwords.....yes it's deep from the mental of my beings i thank u for the love shown here..
     
  5. egyptianeyes

    egyptianeyes Active Member MEMBER

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    simply beautiful .. I feel you..
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel you. good job. alone and time, for some reason, always seem to go hand in hand
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    eygpt........thankz a million

    trueLove..........thank u yes somehow they always go hand N' hand

    happy y'all felt me here
     
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    very deep Rich
    feelin the vibes
    of your journey
    much love
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a journey of time thank u sistah bluewaterrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dont know how i miss this
    deep
    beautiful
    and personal stand...
    great vibe
     
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