Black Poetry : Alone in my mind

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Gaylee, Oct 5, 2002.

  1. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh what a sensuous time
    alone in my mind
    Reaching out for you
    with hands that
    aren't there
    but my body doesn't
    care
    It craves you
    feels you
    Fingers roam
    and squeeze you
    Massage
    and hold
    and kneed you
    Scratch you
    and tease you
    Manipulate
    and please you
    I hear your moans
    and groans
    as you cum to me
    for me
    alone in my mind
     
  2. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: My sista, this stuff is like wow! and more...reach out and touch my sista!

    lo'
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the FEEL of this...mind thing. what imaginative scenes you create.

    lovely.
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the title

    I think we've all been alone in our own minds a time or two...
    nice imagery....

    K
     
  5. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Makaya lo' - Sista, I do so appreciate your encouragment Thanks.

    Baller- So glad you enjoyed, and could feel and see into the scene. Thank you for the read and kind words.

    Kitana-Thank you for your minds time. :)
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see u know in da mind u can be fine
    hummm !! da thinking thing wow!
     
  7. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a beautiful expression. thank you

    be
     
  8. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes $$Rich$$ one can do anything in the mind, one sets ones mind on. LOL

    Heartbeat, thank you for your words as always, and you are welcome.
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this is a great poem
    you should be very proud

    i would

    DSS
     
  10. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brrrrrrrrrrrrrr thrills

    brrrrrrrrrrrrrr chicken spots

    bbbbbeautifull ..

    feel this .... liberty
     
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