Black Poetry : alone but not lonely

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  1. Buttercup

    Buttercup Member MEMBER

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    roses
    gave me not
    took my heart
    let it rot

    candy
    i never received
    that's not what mattered
    it was that you never loved me

    a card
    as simple as it could be
    you never gave a second thought
    you just never believed

    i tried
    but gave up
    you didn't want me
    i guess that was suppose to be enough

    but i don't care
    no not any more
    no tears did i shed
    when you walked out that door

    so good bye.....
    yes good bye.




    alone but not lonely
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Butercup Buttercup! WELCOME

    u r not alone
    standing here wit me
    as i welcome thee

    WELCOME TO THE HOUSE OF DESTEE'S PLAY PLACE
    WERE U CAN DO AS U DO WIT LOVE ,PEACE , RESPECT
    TO GUIDE U THROUGH DA HALLS ......WELCOME !:love: :toast:
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  3. j'hiah

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    *greeting you at the (in)trance*

    saying his loss.


    nfinitely
    jh.
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome..and I like the way you made your entrance...a nice piece..the pain we feel when we are not shown we are truly loved, just in little ways....

    K
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Best Way

    They say you'll never walk alone, so this flow says it just as much as you are always with you and as long as you have you that piece will never be lost--well done--Amun-Ra

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  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Welcome Buttercup,

    This poem is very informative for those who hold on to someone who doesn't love them and doesn't treat them the way they should or would like to be treated, mostly due to fear of loneliness. I think it's much worse to be with someone and still feel lonely. Nice flo.

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
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    Sometimes Buttercup.....

    A woman just have to put a limit on what is acceptable in her relationship, and know when to move on. What a inspiration to find she deserves much better............nice poem. Epiphany
     
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