Black Poetry : Allowing Love to Make Us

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    May I be so bold? As To say
    I too desire you
    my thoughts
    Often drift toward you
    At times I can think of
    No one but you
    You have indeed heighten
    A passion of fire in me
    Touching the core
    Of my deepest desire
    Releasing thoughts
    Feeling
    To know more of you
    Wishing to feel the potency
    Of your strength upon me
    Within me
    I will not apologize
    My thoughts are my own
    And they are of you
    Thinking about how your strong hands
    Would feel caressing the tenderness
    Of my skin
    I gently trace the firmness
    Of you
    Awaken the flesh
    that is now
    Firm within my hand
    To pleasure you more
    I massage you more
    To feel the wetness
    Of your kisses upon my skin
    Reviving a quiet blue ocean
    Into a turbulent of spontaneous waves
    To feel you immerse
    Into the depth of me
    I yield
    Thinking about
    Your manliness
    Deep in the channel of my
    Womanly nest
    Legs entwined around your waist
    Thinking about the foundation of you
    From beginning to end
    Breasts crush into your chest
    Sweat pouring like Niagara Fall
    Each plunge deeper
    And deeper still
    Into the ocean blue
    A gentle cry
    Escaping moans
    Mixing with the echoes
    Of the groans
    To be consume
    Into a eternal ecstasy
    Of heavenly pleasure
    To taste of your lips
    Tongues intertwine
    Hungry
    Feeding the growing need
    To have more
    Inhaling
    The breathe that comes from
    US
    Intoxicated
    Fully
    Taken to another height
    Feeling myself soaring
    The internal muscle
    Within
    Massaging the growth
    Of your manliness
    You come forward
    I come with you
    Moving in harmony
    Hearing the symphony
    The groans
    The moans
    From us
    Holding sturdy
    Soaring from the ocean
    To the sky
    From the sky
    To the clouds
    From the clouds
    Even higher

    Even higher

    The thoughts

    Oh the thoughts
    Wrap me more
    Consuming again
    What I desire more
    Yes my thoughts
    Are my own
    Yet
    Creating a passion
    Made from Love
    Allowing to happen
    What I desire more
    Allowing us not to just make love
    But allowing Love to make us
     
  2. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HOTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    Bluewater......you ignited a flame!!!!!!!

    Where is the fire hose!!

    This was wonderful
    I'm still in awe of your talent!


    PEACE AND LOVE
    twison
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smiling..wow...thank you twison for your love :heart:on this script
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flame: :devil: :hot:
    So I see you also know how to bring the heat.
    I am loving it especailly when you said
    "Creating a passion
    Made from Love
    Allowing to happen
    What I desire more
    Allowing us not to just make love
    But allowing Love to make us "

    I am loving it.

    Smooches!!!!
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    RED ALERT ! RED ALERT ! red alert !!
    smokin hot drop sistah bluewater
    u know i can mix wit dis sweet fire
    the blaze is up and the heat is on compassionately
    ya flow done took my heart away .....whoaaaaaa!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my sista this is blazing.....
    wonderful
    wow
    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi thatgirl74 *smiling* i am glad you like this flow..thank you:heart:

    hi brother Rich yes i know you sure can mix with this...always a welcome..thank you my brother:heart:

    HI sister angel thank you for the love sis:)
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW WOW WOW WOW :jawdrop: OH MY hehehe
    sista Blue I do believe you have set off the fiyah alarms with this one :D
    jus :hot:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Definitely on fire, but with a touch of sweetness, too. Props to you on this, and hey, grab the extinguisher next time.
     
  10. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you dear sister..for the love :heart:on this flow...:laugh:
     
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