Black Poetry : Allow Me.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by midnightsson, Dec 3, 2002.

  1. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Allow me to introduce myself...
    I’m the knight in shining armor that not many women believe exists.
    I’m the voice that calls out to you in your sleep, and the face that flirts with your dreams
    I exist not only physically but in your imagination as well
    when you are lying in bed at night, and feel a twinge of loneliness...
    Allow me to provide strong arms to wrap around you and hold you close.
    when you need or want to talk, allow my ears to receive whatever you transmit.
    Allow me to stimulate you, not only physically, but emotionally
    share your pain with me to lighten the load on your shoulders
    share your joy with me that we may smile together
    share your fear with me so I can comfort you
    share your laughter with me so we can both be silly for awhile
    share your confusion with me, so we can put our 2 heads together and figure it out.
    Allow me to stimulate you, not only sexually but intellectually and mentally
    let me ask you questions that reflect my interest in knowing you better
    Allow me to embrace you as not just a lover....
    but as a brother, a soul-mate, and most importantly..a friend
    Allow me to enter your heart and make a home there
    Allow me to add kindling to that little ember that’s smoldering in your heart..
    and spark it to a blazing inferno
    Please don’t erect a wall to shut me out, don’t label me as “just another guy”...
    and not get to know me fully
    Allow me to dedicate myself to making you happy, because that’s what makes me happy
    Allow me to show you my passion in every thing I do and say
    Allow me to love you....


    Derrick H.
     
  2. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Wow"

    "Okay"
    I am yours, I am allowing you too.... that was nice and I needed the visual :kiss:

    Very nicely put!!!!

    Be blessed
    Queen
     
  3. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you queen...:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tyght scribe now all da ladies know who u b.....flow on !
     
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    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my my my...you had me by the end of the third line
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    got my heart speeding with that one, it's nice to know your there when us ladies need need a lover, a friend, a soul-mate, and a brother. I was wondering who arms those were around me the other night in my bed ;) nice flow very beutiful peace and blessins poet keep flowin :):):)
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh and yeah your allowed
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Only a true prophet knows the value of a true king, words can only symbolize the essence but the spirit of your wisdom speaks out with a loud scream, this is excellent and the spirit sings its own song of a true black king.
     
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