Black Poetry : Allergic reaction

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by iwannabe, Oct 1, 2005.

  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I survey your life
    For a reason why you're so INSANE-
    Why do you play these games?
    It's like you don't know my name
    (Like Alicia Keyes complained.)
    So conceited- compliments go straight to you head!
    It's my fault though, I encourage you- I persist…
    But for one so beautiful as this
    I can't resist
    (Here I go again)
    I won't dismiss
    The fact that you're so fine-
    (But here's a negative)
    Inside my dear, you're way less than a dime!
    I paid my dues…
    Yes- I took the time
    To make sure you were treated right when you were mine.

    Sadly you couldn't return the favor-
    (Lazy motherf*cka) As if it's so much labor
    To reciprocate- to appreciate.
    Ironic that female's curse fate-
    Complain that only DOGS catch their bait.
    Not real men, not gentlemen or nice guys.
    But **** when you have one by your side
    You can't show thanks or even do
    Half the sh1t he does when he caters to
    You and all your ridiculous needs.
    So I'm sorry, I can't keep
    Groveling at your feet.

    I'm calling it quits-
    (That's enough of this relationship!)
    I'm saying good bye-
    (I'm allergic to bullsh*t!)
    :karate:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you treat someone right and they don't appreciate it, you feel used and abused. Too bad we can't be allergic to these types of people to begin with. Witty drop poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime this can make you wanna just u know
    i feel you here and been there , seen that too ....
    awesome drop of truth
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bringing this one back to the top.
     
  5. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, this is so good.
    I guess me and u got
    the same allergic reaction.
     
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    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    some brothas just don't appreciate what a precious jewel the black woman is sis..........

    Keep on scribing, lovin da flow!
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa
    Tell it like it is Poet
    No more groveling go head Poet
     
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