Black Poetry : All Your Buts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by renee31127, Oct 4, 2003.

  1. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You say you've made your choice
    But it's not clear at all to me
    Your mouth speaks of you and I together
    But your actions with her speak much louder
    You've never lied to me
    But withholding truths hurts more
    You're with her and you love her
    But then say you want to be with me
    You waited too long to tell me you wanted me
    But now wonder why I want someone else
    You made me turn to him
    But now you want me to come back to you
    You know that I love you
    But not enough to be hurt by you again
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you go girl...
    like this flow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    but i felt u so
    inside dis flow
    but it was tyte
    scribe on sis...........
    lovin it
     
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    such emotion...I was truly feeling this
    been here before...letting go is always
    so difficult...even if you do logically, the heart
    is always reluctant to...

    very emotive read, Renee!
     
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    yes this is an emotional flow
    feeling the hurt
    of letting go
    yes my sistah
    let the flow pour
    Peace
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes the read is real just like my sista renee...kick his "buts" out the door LoL :)
     
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    nice flow!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Game Over!

    Girl, you too smart for your britches... I love the way that you write.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooohhh...i love this flow!!!!!
     
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