Black Poetry : All These Truths

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  1. LyricalOasis

    LyricalOasis Member MEMBER

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    ALL THESE TRUTHS

    My entire reason for living revolves around one source.
    Your are everything in good health,
    Evidently, you have been conjured from the Garden of Eden and brought Forth.

    Though your past may hold you accountable for your feelings and your guardian's stealth.
    I hold no stance upon you and never have my eyes gazed upon a more reliant path.
    I am wondering your road and though the bridge ahead shows narrow, you support me with you railing.

    Our love, our love. Everyday is somewhat growing so strong, so mighty even though the conversations lessen.
    We are establishing a creation, our own universe.
    As you have inscribed on previous scrolls "This life I have if it's without you demons can eat me in hell."
    In response to the image you create in between your lines,
    I have yet to see my life without you,
    There, I will be strung upon a cross as Jesus although with Iron rusted nails embedded
    in my spine.

    If ever lost, I would suffer a hundred times
    to find your heart of divine nobility.
    If ever one day I should lose my sight,
    I will always see you in this dark night.

    All these truths I continue to write on my pale oak tree.
    Will forever be remembered and the promises will last an eternity.
    As the sun will forever beam,
    I to will forever confirm my love to you and my home on heaven and earth.
    Nothing could throw us off the course we are traveling.
    All these words I phrase on this paper, later become
    reality because of how strong we see our destined future.

    The kids we create, if any, would surely follow out path up until now.
    No one can be rewarded for the love we share
    but he God who put us here.

    What more could I say than to go on for days
    about our love that shines so bright,
    and your voice that tends to make my body scream at night.
    The Plagiarism I commit as I thief your written lines.
    Your writing, no matter the subject, your father, your mother,
    your homeless past, reaches out so deep to me, it's like I feel your hurt, I feel your pain.
    I have reason to commit this crime.

    These words I mingle, these thoughts I mutate allow this burning heart to flame.
    You being a sole individual will be the first and the last to see my heart's reflection.
    You being a sole individual will be the first and the last to witness me express my affection.

    As I reach page three of the trust I bestow in you,
    I am standing on firm ground,
    taking my toll with all these truths,
    Through thickest conditions, old or new,
    through all issues our love will bound.

    Nymphy Oboute
    October 2003
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was nice...
    keep flow'n
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done i like dis let da ink drop on
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well posed i like this alot..
    much love on it:angel1:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Officially Wowed...

    I've been reading your work and your flow is deep with
    undercurrents that pull the reader to depths beneath
    the line in which you write...imagery brings me above the
    surface gasping for air...yet I dive back in willingly
    because your flow...is incredible...

    Nice work poet!
     
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