Black Poetry : all the things i shoulda done*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i shoulda kissed you
    the first time i ever laid eyes on you--
    i shoulda told you that--
    heaven don't exist
    unless you are near me--
    i shoulda said that i could never love you--
    because the tidal wave of emotion--
    that overcomes my complete form
    is immersed in sheer amazement--
    of even your innermost minimalistic mannerism--

    *and love understates that.

    i can't say i've fallen for your physical form--
    i love
    all three-hundred and sixty degrees of you--
    with all of my thin frame--
    with all the valves and atriums and ventricles--
    of my heart--

    my eyes slowly close and sing the praises of your heaven-sent EVERYTHING

    and hold the high notes ostentatiously--
    afraid to open my eyes--
    because the thought of you might leave--
    so...
    i sleep a lot now
    more now than ever--
    to keep my eyes closed...
    to see and think of you.

    i shoulda told you--
    BEAUTIFUL
    stands etched against everything
    everyone
    everywhere you touch
    and it takes me...

    into other dimensions where
    words exist that can describe the unparalled
    unsurpassed--
    unabashed--
    joy your face brings to mine--

    i don't smile--
    i illuminate blissfully--

    i shoulda told you...
    i can't get you off my mind.


    (youaredeepinmecanikeeputhere?)

    thepoetsean
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    AND

    YA EMOTIONAL FEELINGS TAKE U
    TO A PLACE WHERE FEW EVER GO
    AND MANY WANNA BE ............
    IT'S NOT TO LATE WAKE UP AND
    GO TELL HER YA HEART AND LOVE
    2 BE LOVED............FLOW YO BUTT OFF!!!!
    :heart: :heart: :toast: :heart: :heart:
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my

    can i melt into nothingness now?
    this here flow was so...
    so...
    she must be ABSOLUTELY flattered...
    keep this going!
    your skillz are all that.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wildflower, $RICH$

    w7- how's poetic flowz? it's been a minit since i been there. lemme know. and of course, i thanks ya for the read.

    FLYGHTMAYN-- I can't thank you enough. but i'll try. thanks for the read windy city man. (is that why yr flyght gets so much lift? I figured it was the wind.)

    (lol)

    sean.
     
  5. DeJay

    DeJay MEMBER MEMBER

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    You in my brain

    I though i was the only one that think that dogg........ man!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mann... i haven't been to poeticflowz since last winter.
    and even that visit was momentary.
    this is the place for me.
    -7
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean

    It's good to be readin ya scribes again bruh... I been gone too long.

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DeJay and Reas...

    thank ya for the read.

    Reas. **** RYTE U BEEN GONE TOO LONG! WHERE YA BEEN?


    sean.
     
  9. blackstar

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    SPEECHLESS

    :toast: :toast:
    I'M REALLY LOVING THIS ONE. BOY YOU JUST DON'T KNOW HOW BRILLIANT U R WITH WORDS. "i don't smile--
    i illuminate blissfully-- " THAT LINE RIGHT THERE WAS SOOO TIGHT. I HAD TO STEP BACK AND READ THAT LINE OVER AND OVER AGAIN. **** SEAN!! THAT'S ALL I CAN SAY. I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO RESPOND TO YOUR WORK SOMETIMES. :spin:
    :toast: :toast:
     
  10. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank ya miss star*

    i really and truly do appreciate your response and read. thanks for eye-blessing my piece.

    sean.
     
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