Black Poetry : All that you don't know

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, May 20, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Time for you to sit down Ja
    Because Im about to tell you the truth
    Im going to tell you all my troubles
    That are bothering me at my root

    I just want you to keep this thought
    That I love you with all my heart
    I love you unconditionally
    Ok,..I'm about to start..

    I cheated on you
    And no, it wasn't just one time
    I'm sorry that it happened
    I feel like you not knowin is a crime

    You wanna know who it is?
    You wanna know what I've done?
    I feel like I've destroyed our love Ja
    And I'm so sorry for what I've done

    Ok, it was him...
    You know that nig*a that was in my past?
    Yes I was stupid to do it
    Cuz that friendship didn't even last

    I lost my virginity to him
    At the time I thought it was ok
    But , It was such a mistake
    I wish I could take it back today

    Jalon I love you
    And I know that won't be enough
    But just don't leave me
    To lose you now would be rough

    Ok, you need time to think...
    Boo I know, Because your sad
    I never meant to break your heart
    I never knew what kind of boyfriend I had

    I want to be with you for a long time
    I want you ,Miss you,and Hell I even need
    You've become my left hand
    Just make your decision at your own speed

    I love you Jalon
    It won't be easy to forgive
    I acted like a fool
    Plase come back...please forgive

    :crying: :(
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one shall forgive thee
    dis was openly spoken with heart
    now time to make a new start
    u will be forgiven ......in due time
     
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    If he choose's not to forgive you as one sister to another please!! please! forgive yourself! your scribe is heart felt.
    Nice!!
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep and heartfelt...i love it...
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****...you put it out there...i pray love returns to you.
     
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    what is truely yours
    shall always return...
    peace
    khasm
     
  7. UniqueOne

    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    honest is the best policy because imagine if you didn't say a thing it would have hurt worse for him if he had of found out some other way you did it the right way hopefully he'll stay
     
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