Black Poetry : All That Sunshine

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  1. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All That Sunshine

    All that sunshine
    I should have known I was getting too much light!
    I was shinning and glowing and just not knowing it wouldn’t
    Last all year
    I bought some fabulous summer gear
    Bought Armani underwear
    But my face sheds not one tear
    I care---don’t get me wrong
    But my song collection consist of no sad songs
    I need something fast ,
    Real fast ---see it didn’t last the way I planned for it to—my friends knew
    I should have known I was getting too much light!
    The back massage in Connecticut
    The pizza on Broadway Ave ….. it was fine
    You took my mind on a fantasy ride
    I begin to let you dry all my H20 you know

    I thought you meant it when we spent it
    The check to make our weekends set
    But I bet you regret the moves you made
    Because now your getting the shade and I don’t need your sunshine anymore!
    All that sunshine—I should have known I was getting too much light.
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all that light...
    i love this piece...!
    -7
     
  3. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey

    thanks WildFlower.. It's a poem I read .. It's agood reading poem. I wrote sometime ago... a oldie but goodie.. Thanks
     
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    MAN

    I REALLY LOVE THIS ONE
    REMINDS ME OF WAY BACK WHEN!
    THANKZ.........MR.M:toast:
     
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    Mr Marion....


    when i finished reading this one... the first thing i
    though was... "Okay!" (like giving a ^5)... :)

    it was tyght... errythang was said just ryght!
    & i'ont know 'bout the sunshine... but SunShyne
    will always be shynin' on ya!! :)

    OneLuv.
     
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