Black Poetry : All That I Can Do... Is think of you

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Woke up this morning
    With you in my heart

    I went to bed
    Feeling so low
    Wishing I could reach out

    I don't like being alone
    Feeling you so close
    Although you're never near

    I wish you could be here with me right now
    I just can't really figure out

    My real feelings
    For you

    It's constant sorrow
    I wish that I could replace you, my love

    And I wish
    That I didn't so freely give you my love

    Because you're never there
    Although we try to make it work

    We both want different things out of life
    And I believe you do more harm than good

    My love for you, sometimes runs so deep
    Pouring and overflowing on a river bank

    Impatience is a strong concern of mines
    I wish I could just hold you
    I wish I could feel our lips touch even if it was for the last time.

    Silence is so evil
    Because it makes me cry

    Silence is painful
    I don't have to lie.

    I pray for you every night
    Right now I want you so much

    I just don't how to make up my mind.

    All that I can do ... Is think of you.

    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we all thing of our one love yet feel low coz
    they hinder our eyes ...we seek da love that
    is their, but soon da sound will be heard .....

    storm ya on top of da game , wuv ya...
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...i guess we have all been here before, desert stormin'. i am really feelin' this piece this morn, it has taken me back. i'm lovin' it! it's good to read you again. and ya know what i always say...yo poetry is therapy, gurl. scribe it on out!
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this kind of love can tear you apart and make your heart cry..

    deciding to love him and take the chance of being hurt..or not love him and always wonder what that love would have been like..is the dilemma...I can feel you on this peace...
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been their done that and to O.D on a love fantasy is not such a tragic destiny
    But to always wonder what could have been can eat you alive from within.
    Only you can decide but a love so fierce is hard to deny
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words are so true shaz

    Kitana you are so right, I'm only 17 going on 18 a senior in highschool(getting ready to graduate! yeah!) and I haven't dated that much because I haven't sincerely really enjoyed anyones company.I've also been through a lot of transition growing up and haven't been able to maintain stable relationships with males or females. I feel as if my life is just beginning and I can really do what I want to do now.

    He has different aspirations than me and it would be like tug of war.I believe on the road to my destiny and my true passion with music that I will find the person who best suits me and I him.I will also have things in common that are really important. Not just simple things like, two people love to watch movies or sumptin. Feel me? I feel as sisters we should eliminate any stress possible. And not try to think we can change people. Especially if you can't stand them. We're two very different people who have grown up differently. He's one year older than me and we met when I was 15. We're both from Oakland and there are some similiar things we've been through. We've both changed as people. He was an ex and then get back together type deal. I broke up with him before for the same reason. I guess in the end I'm just a lonely person. It will soon change. As I mature and enjoy being an adult, loving me, and being single. He's more like a homie or whatever, feel me? So in a sense we are connected and feel a connection in that way.

    My relationship with him has really been a love, hate relationship. Like I love him and care but he makes me worry, type thing. Honestly. Guys seem to get on my nerves more than anything else and seem to be a handfull and I don't have the time or patience to work around that. I have very high goals and I want to become a professional singer, write songs, etc. So, I am young and I really don't know what I want right now. Even with him so I decided to move on. I can trust him as a friend but not really with my heart. Thank you for your advice. I appreciate it.


    Desert Storm
     
  7. Watcher

    Watcher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Getting ready to sound like my brother...

    But you whole life is ahead of you
    move on
    and experience Life's song
    for the one you seek
    will find you
    when you least expect it
    he's being prepared for you even now
    fashioned by the Master to be
    the vessel chosen for you
    look and live
    failed relationships
    gives you learned experiences
    to handle future
    relationships
    hold on
    don't give up
    reach for the stars
    and before you know it the stars will
    reach down to you.

    and of course I'll be Watchin
     
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    i can hear this one

    in song already

    gone Desert Storm!

    do the **** thang :lol:

    pd
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desert Storm

    Maybe this is one of those loves that has a connection that time will not break....and later on when you both know what you are looking for, it may blossom...or you may recognise it as a first love and move on...but no girl ever forgets her first love..even though she may have other loves...

    and I have to say this....if you are only 17 and are already creating peaces such as this one...don't ever put down your pen..you are gifted...and you can only hone this talent more finely as time passes....

    K
     
  10. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Gurl

    I don't know whether to laugh or cry. Trying to modle some kind of self control heah, but I think I'm getting weaker. I don't know where life is going to take me. I'm just trying to make the right decisions that's all. It's very difficult. I appreciate the compliment it lifts my spirit a great deal. Thanks for your reply. Thanks Watcher and poeticdelight. I appreciate the replys as well.
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm