Black Poetry : All-Seeing Eye

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by klabarron, Nov 4, 2002.

  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got a secret!
    i got a secret!
    but who is this over my shoulder
    i'm creeping
    i'm seeking
    looking for my prey
    the hunter hunteth
    but the hounds are on my hills
    my prey is running
    but seems all eyes are on me.
    who is that?
    i turn and no one is there
    and my pursuit resumes
    i'm chasing her
    in smooth verse
    and sensual words
    i chase her
    in soft touches
    and light ear nibbles
    i chase her
    in illusion
    and techno-colored sensations
    i chase her
    who is that?
    again i turn and see no one
    and my conquest is completed
    i get her!
    romance her!
    back-slam-bounce her!
    for my pleasure
    and it was good
    who is that?
    who tapped me on my shoulder?
    who is that?
    and from within
    i realize it was...GOD!
    i couldn't hide from His...
    eye....???
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kla,

    Insightful piece!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bro - you diggin' deep to find some pieces.

    still holding down maxwell afb - klab
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis was a wide eye piece keep flowing!!!
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thx rich-man!!!
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is really good and had me speed reading to find out who it was.
    Well done poet
     
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    peace shaz!!
     
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