Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Aug 21, 2002.
[COLOR=sky blue]i need sunshine
and i need the pouring rain
i need... all of you
my brutha of need
i and beside u in thoughts
man dis here is too tyght it say so much to da mind
...this made me smile.
short & sweet... yet deep with meaning.
(you do have your moments!! )
listen, j'hiah....i like your poems!
This melts me.
So much said in so few words.
This is a soul sweet peace.
Scribeaboutit! It helps.
my sentiments exactly...
Maybe then...you will forgive me...if you still need me.
Short, but enough to jump in to... dig dat!
two t-shirts with that one it.... between the eyez
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