Black Poetry : All of a Sudden

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HighEmme, Dec 17, 2002.

  1. HighEmme

    HighEmme Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can't believe this
    I can honestly say that I'm speechless
    and that I really don't need this
    But all of a sudden
    it's like I'm hypnotized
    and immobilized,
    all of a sudden
    ready to compromise
    no longer bothered by your size
    instead captivated by your eyes
    and how they penetrate my mind
    all of a sudden
    I find myself liking you
    the way that you like me
    and I find myself visiting
    more frequently
    It's like you make me happy
    But then
    all of a sudden
    everything changed
    told me that you were too old
    to be playing these games
    But I'm not playing any
    all of a sudden
    I like what we have
    and I don't want anything to change
    all of a sudden
    you said that
    you were about to be done with it
    because I was just having fun with it
    all of a sudden
    I feel taken advantage of
    and I feel mistreated
    you shouldn't say things
    that you don't mean
    and I know that you didn't mean it
    all of a sudden
    I like you
    and now I finally see it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    spellbound in da depth of love .....
    u flowin' ya heart out !!!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    HighEmme

    Very nice...

    Nice flow too.

    I could feel the emotions roll...up and down.

    :toast: :D
     
  4. k0k0

    k0k0 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feelin this piece. we all go thru it at one point. nice
     
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    watch ya self .... love comeS from many direction and all of a sudden i am feeling you ALL OF A SUDDEN ...... JUST CAN'T EXPLAIN IT CAN YA ???????????????
     
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    without a doubt...

    nice drop!
     
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