Black Poetry : All Mine

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 30, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she's got it all, from the beauty to the brains
    equipped w/ a lot of power, grip as strong as chains
    body right, enuf curves n dips to surf on
    smile like sunshine, shorty is definetly a turn on

    skin as smooth as silk, i swear she sweats lotion
    her walk is mean, elegant in its right, never seen such motion
    complexion of mocha, shes my mornin drink
    eyes like almonds, they sparkle with every blink

    she speaks with intentions, not just to make comments
    educated, sophisticated, holds all the right knowledge
    she knows when im down n says the right words to life me up
    understands when im mad, knows i can b difficult, but never gives me up

    she holds me down, when im faced with my situations
    she's my supporter, my brains of my opperation
    she's the light to my path, the queen of our castle
    never causes beef, never been the type to hassle

    she speaks the truth, doesn't believe in lies
    she's the type to say "i love u'' and loves to stare into my eyes
    she knows when im hiding sumthin, yea she spots that well
    she knows what im hidin too, i aint even gotta tell

    she is, **** she is, everything i ever wanted n need
    she makes my crazy world sane, makes my heart beat
    she knows what to do n where to do it to make me feel pleasure
    tells me i put it down n no one ever took her to that level

    She is... yes she is...
    all mine.
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And I'm glad you're thankful for her. The description sounds a bit like me ((modestly speaking of course :) ) but I've yet to find a man that can read me like that....That's ridiculously awesome! I loved it!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautiful and poeticly sprayed
    all mines.............i love dem wordz
    tyte scribe u vibe
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lucky, lucky human being
    to have someone like that!
    tyte write!
    Peace to ya!
     
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    I hope she sees this scribe. Absolutely beautiful!
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yall. i hope she sees it too lol.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poeticly , that poem was so tight and I must say she's a lucky woman to have someone write like you just did. Tyte scribe
     
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    Wonderful

    poeticlyspeaking,

    This was a wonderful write so full of warmth and love! I am blessed to have someone in my life that writes me beautiful sonnets of his heart and soul..... So I hope as well that she see's it and appreciates the beauty you hold within your heart... Great Job Poet...

    AqueenPassing

    :wave:
     
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    Within these walls your strength the power of love.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u, but to be honest i didnt write that for anyone particular, just someone im waitin on... if u get what i mean. thats why i said i hope she sees it too, cuz im lookin for her.
     
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