Black Poetry : ALL IN

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  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankful 4 another day after all
    Man has no control
    Might take awhile while we get there
    For sure
    Rhyming
    Dropping them
    suns
    to dark.
    Raising the
    physical up.


    Only the rotation controls us.
    What goes around
    comes around.
    Been their done that.
    Ain't nothing new
    under the sun.
    Not the sweat of my hand
    nor
    The outgrowth of my
    brows.

    It has already been said and proven.
    The physical confirmation
    of how my spirit shall
    look & feel is only
    the control that shall control physically.
    So watch how things
    rotate naturally
    and realize the convenient spot you've been put in
    To make things come
    out of being
    Nothing but the same
    After all has been said
    and done.
    Man can't control
    mother natures' rotation
    on earths' stars.
    Continuation is
    always needed.
    As we will develop
    into one another with
    man's help not control.
    Member 2 is needed
    to make more
    stars connect into
    our being a grand
    personality chosen
    for us by mothers
    timing of birth.
    Personally speaking
    depending on who
    you like.
    It's in the stars
    Feels like butterflies.
    My timing may be off
    But
    these feelings will not stop.
    Plenty out their to choose
    from
    But
    Only one made me a
    mother of the current
    sun.
    Coming in now like
    Django saved his
    soon to be children's
    mother after all.
    Ben ain't stopped
    being their for all
    intent purposes.
    Submissively or
    creatively chosen
    for us to learn the
    fruits of life from.
    Nothing being new
    but individuals,
    like ben their,
    being dropped out
    just in the nic of time.
     
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    Raising the physical UP
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The physical beings of rotation here two submit
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let that poem go for
    future generations to lift up.
    If not live today
    it's a gift through wells of why
    your but matters.
    # sharingwhy

    Sharing Survival Instincts

    Well babe
    I know your hole
    Has ran dry
    Enough was has never been enough
    The water that our ancestors once found
    To be left underearths surface
    For our survival
    The discovery of the flow and us
    Are one in the same.
    My body has held this bucket up
    Since I was showed by my elders
    Each generation uses the flow
    To inf incise their responsibility
    To provide
    What has always been there
    For our growth & quenching feelings of
    never spoiling just pulling up to make a way
    Happen as it always has been.
    Villages share their wells
    To be able
    To never stop growing
    Inorder to join minds then after
    Each way is a different path
    When one well goes dry
    The same path down 30 feet or so
    Another well of discovery
    Will lead us to our ancestor's well of daily survival through the flow of life.
     
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    yes indeed sis you nailed it ....
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thx so much I's tried!)
     
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    Who’s finishing…Me is always the focus.t2

    It was written in the picture. r

    Actions put spells on itself a

    Headache come when too many things p

    Speak for themselves. a

    Breaking it down will bring you down r

    Automatically u

    Focus o

    On understanding the current vibration y

    Of u

    What settles for your understanding n

    For once o

    The beauty of the spell l

    Is in the eye’s of the beholder l

    Believe A

    Perceive s

    How this sounds to you ‘

    And put your spell on the pick t

    Put yourself where it seems to be i

    While w

    That thang becomes o

    Fabulously RAW. Can u/ see that alley way? N
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simplifying I Can

    Throw you under the bus

    Cause you

    “Supposedly”

    Ain’t right.

    Freedom we now have to pass

    Our opinions simply cause…

    I’ll let you finish

    I ain’t the only one that be judging

    For the sake of a longer name

    Then ultimently

    SIC. Came along

    All dressed up

    In jewels saved for you

    To depend on

    Their actions towards you

    Here comes

    The more sic then you.
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rolling up

    Who made us in the mirror

    Our imaginations configurating

    Who we wanna see

    Science told us this is what we see

    Automatically

    Reflecting

    The creation our past experience

    Have made

    To be me

    We can’t see past

    The creations of the mirror

    How it was said to be

    Overall what we can imagine.

    Who & what we used to be

    NOW.

    Always needing a joint to join and reflect.