Black Poetry : All In A Life

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Buttercup, Jul 14, 2003.

  1. Buttercup

    Buttercup Member MEMBER

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    Life as we know it today:
    Guy meets girl
    she brings baby into the world
    daddy is now gone
    mother and child left alone
    mommy's laid back
    not caring where the child is at
    on the corner is where he hangs
    finding love as he joins a gang
    child finds trouble and lands in jail
    mom wont work, so she can't afford bail
    "oh my child" she starts to cry
    "I should have been there,
    I don't want you to die"
    but it's to late,
    he's been caught doing wrong
    now your child that once was
    is now your child that's now gone

    It's all in a life
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ..feeling you one this..
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes so true and well felt
    about daddy's not being a man
    momma care less at hand
    i feel this flow
    i see it daily like a show .....flow on
     
  4. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes indeed it is buttercup
    it really is all in a life.........
    keep flowin

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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