Black Poetry : All I Really Want

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  1. Virgil

    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I used to think that I could replace love with lust.
    I didn’t think that there was any one that I could trust.
    I put my hopes in that love would one day come.
    I guess that I just needed someone.
    But then I saw her face.
    The one no one could replace.
    She redefined my vision of love.
    Hopefully she fits me like a glove.
    Embodied everything that I want in a woman.
    My heart is something that she has already won.

    All that I really want is to have real love.
    All that I want to do is to show her real love.
    It’s something that I’ve never had.
    Such a thing can’t be so bad.

    I always noticed her, but first she noticed me.
    That’s how this whole thing started, but I doubt that you could see.
    I could imagine what she must say, it’d probably be,
    “Why doesn’t he just came up and talk to me”.
    Now if I can be real for one moment, I guess I suffered from a case of shame.
    Afraid that if she got to know me well, then what she saw in me would not be the same.

    All that she really wants is someone to show love.
    And all that I really want is to be that one.
    And because of how strong I feel.
    What we could have would have to be real.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, this was beautiful...such a delicately crafted flow...Feeling this piece!

    Angeli
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this was too sweettttttttt!!!
    love the way it was posed.
     
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    this is marvelous...wonderful expression...feeling this...
    Peace
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this indeed is a beautiful poem,shows expressions of love,which u can never have enough of
     
  6. Virgil

    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ and angelicsage, thanks for complimnting my flow.
     
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    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater, thanks for appreciating the expression.
     
  8. Virgil

    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the_story, thanks for the compliment, and no, you can't have enough love.
     
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    So nice... so sweat..... very very very beautiful........
     
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    ....sweet. Sorry!!!!:eek: :D
     
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