Black Poetry : all I need..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by geminit, May 13, 2003.

  1. geminit

    geminit Member MEMBER

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    Where R u now... if u r not with me
    Who got ur arms now... if they r not mine
    I miss u babe,
    I miss ur smile, I miss the love we made
    I miss ur voice, I miss ur wormth
    and now i'm lost without u
    I don't know what to do..
    I'm just wondering if i'm still in ur heart, in ur thougts
    cause' u r still in my soul, in my eyes
    and I can't do without u
    I don't wanna let u know
    that it's driving me crazy..
    but if u feel me, u know it..
    so come back to me
    ..cause all I need is u babe
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Geminit, I can get with this... keep bringin' it!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    nice piece...i've been there...
    keep da flow going...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    well felt i feel dis one and hear u loud
    tyte flow
    welcome to destee's poetic playground of love
    welcome upon family & friendz u be kin
    welcome within as u scribe

    come join us in open mic right here on destee
    at www.************ we be flowin poetry openly
    cross da mic /live music and friendly chats 24/7 welcome !:wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely written and presented.....love it!
     
  6. geminit

    geminit Member MEMBER

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    Yo'll thanx so much for your love!
    It's a really pleasure for me have found you..
    at first I felt like a stranger here, but now, seeing your love, I'm so happy to be in this GREAT family, very very very HAPPY!!!
    Peace :)
     
  7. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U did geminit!!!!!!

    I'm glad u got your way around to posting....

    I really love this piece...it almost sounds like the things i would say to some I'm digging...its really beautiful..

    well done poet..
     
  8. geminit

    geminit Member MEMBER

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    Yes, mkhaya, i did!!!! :spin:

    Thanx so much 4 ur help and comment!!
    I really appreciate it!
    Peace :)
     
  9. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was a good no GREAT one geminit. i got one for you now. tell me if u like it.

    Chemistry

    b4 u came 2 me,
    i was a gas.
    people could c right thru me,
    like i was a glass.
    but when i got 2 know u,
    i became a liquid.
    i could barely hold my shape,
    when my cheek--u kissed it.
    then as our relationship went on,
    i became a solid.
    and the love i had 4 u,
    no 1 could eveer abolish.
    but now things have changed,
    we r 2 trees growing 4rm the ground.
    we didn't know each other,
    but now we're a compound................(hope it'll change yo situation) [email protected]
     
  10. geminit

    geminit Member MEMBER

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    Hey Lil'

    Thank u 4 ur poem, I like it a lot, good fantasy!
    but sorry, i don't understand what u mean with good no great..
    maybe u refer to my poem... but I referred to this site :confused:
    can u explain me better....?

    :)

    PS: I hope it too....:(
     
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