Black Poetry : All i ever wanted!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rico love, Mar 1, 2016.

  1. rico love

    rico love Member MEMBER

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    All I ever wanted was to be part of your heart
    and for us to be together to never be apart.
    No one else in the world could even compare,
    You’re perfect and so is this love we share.
    We have so much more then I ever thought we would,
    I love you more then I thought I ever could.
    I promise to give you all I have to give,
    I’ll do anything for you as long as I live.
    In your eyes I see our present, future, and past,
    by the way you look at me I know we will last.
    I hope that one day you will come to realize,
    how perfect you are when seen though my eyes.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one man's jOURney to PERFECTion.

    loving the feel of this.
     
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    rico love Member MEMBER

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    Thank you i feel for a beautiful soul and she really brings my creativity out im new to sharing what i write, im usually shy but you guys here are helping me tell my stories and poems thank u
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel you on that.

    Destee may not remember but, way back when, when i first came to Destee's earlier life...there were a group of poets who helped me to develop my poetry...to get over my nervousness, and shyness, about sharing my words...to become not only the poet, but the person i am. Destee's poets did that.

    we've got you, rico love. you're home.

    we're family.
     
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    Very nice flow rico.
    I like the ending of this, keep sharing.
     
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