Black Poetry : All I Ever Wanted...(response to heartbeat's Expectations)

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  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All I Ever Wanted...

    All I ever wanted
    Was to
    Love somebody
    With chocolate-covered hearts
    On St. Valentine's Day
    With my heartstrings
    Playing violins
    Each and every day
    To make paper airplanes
    To bridge the gap
    Between the distance
    Of our separate pathways

    And all I ever wanted
    Was to

    Lie down quietly
    Besides you
    And watch you sleep
    While you tamed
    The night noises
    Underneath the sheets
    To find the missing stars
    Underneath your eyelids
    And tell the universe
    About your hidden treasures

    And all I ever wanted
    Was to

    Lock myself inside
    Your right palm
    Then throw away the keys
    To this secret passage
    Grab hold of your insides
    Hold your heart hostage
    And never let you go

    And I wanted you

    To find me there
    Somewhere
    Anywhere
    Over here

    In your corner

    Hunter
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  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaaahhhhhh

    JJJJJJJJJEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

    I am lovin alladis, my sustuh!! :)

    A
     
  3. cela

    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. Hunter

    BEAUTIFUL is inadequate for the way this peace is feelin in me.

    WOW!

    CELA
     
  4. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this scribe inspires thought and pulls at the heartstrings. i applaud you but this you already know for i's one ya biggest fanzzzz' :D:

    thanks for this scribe...
     
  5. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honored. This is beautiful.

    BE
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HUNTER....

    sister dear...

    love... love... & mo' love!! :)

    this was tyghtly scribed... but then i'm not surprised!

    all you eva wanted, huh? i can dig it!

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  7. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all i ever wanted....

    ...was you.

    seriously tyght piece.

    thanks.
     
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