Black Poetry : ***All I Do***

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Think of how exciting
    it would be,
    If you could discover that for
    one moment
    you feel like me,
    see like me,
    breathe like me,
    you want to be with me....
    What would you do if you could
    discover that this vision I've had is
    made for two?
    Could you imagine yourself
    free falling through my atmosphere?
    Loosing your sense of time, space and
    even the feel of your deeply hidden fears?

    Your tears fall and bathe me in condensation
    of heaven-inspired revelations about a
    moment, a place, and a hour where nothing
    exists but you and me.

    My candles are lit.
    My prayers are said.
    I'm completely at the mercy of
    God; waiting for your arrival.
    Each small noise has me running to see
    if its you. If you've finally come;
    Cause all I do is think about you.

    And would it seem odd if
    I came to the conclusion that if
    I can't have you then I’d rather spend my life
    alone?
    It sounds crazy but not as insane as me
    knowing that you made my soul a burning flame.
    You illuminated my game and launched me to
    love struck fame.
    And in the end all I can say is....
    Until you come home to me for eternity,
    I'll continue to live and wait,
    Cause all I do is think about you.



    Copyright 2004
    "Son of the DayStar" Publishing
    "Poeta nascitur, non fit."
    The Poet is born, not made.
    PropheticNsyght
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This read like a psalm. This was simply breathtaking.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a wonderful work of art this is, I truely enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing this piece.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmm you sooth me like
    sweet pure music ma. Thank you so much.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you my darling Queen.
     
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    this was a very nice read
    thanks for sharing it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte indeed nice flava
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for reading it and for your love.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bruh as always you are so precious. Thanks man.
     
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    Deeply amazing what love can
    do to a person in reality and in
    fantasy.