Black Poetry : All I Can Say

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Mar 9, 2003.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is so much I want to write about
    So much I want to say
    About this whole situation
    But the words just won’t come
    So many emotions running through my heart
    But none of them make any sense
    Am I as cold as you make me out to seem
    Am I emotionally dysfunctional
    Because I can’t shed a tear at the loss of you?
    You say my vibe is “nonchalant”
    When you told me there was another
    I’m hard-core for making you choose
    And not really caring about the choice
    You see
    This is me
    Straight up , Honest , Up front
    Forever in pursuit of the realness baby
    You and I
    You and her
    Me and him
    In the end it’s all the same
    You see
    You and me were never meant to be
    Our destiny amounted to nothing more than a pit stop
    In the race called love
    So you see
    Whether or not we end this race now or later
    We cannot escape the inevitability of our love’s demise
    have I failed as a woman?
    Cause I cannot “trip” over your goodbye?
    No yelling
    No screaming
    No “oh why me”!
    Honey chile
    Let it go
    I have
    Say goodbye
    I have
    Move on
    I have
    I guess now , after all this
    There really wasn’t much to write about
    Much in my heart to say
    But goodbye

    Natasha
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see, if everyone had this attitude, they'd be aight..

    tyte peace ndeed :toast:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i agree indeed so much to say !
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the way you said this..hanging on only prolongs the pain, it's better to part before it goes bad..

    k
     
  5. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and by the sounds of it good riddance!
    Let him suffer his own goodbyes.

    *Emma*