Quiet Poetry Lounge : All I Can Say Is ****!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1Sexy_Beauty, Apr 16, 2003.

  1. 1Sexy_Beauty

    1Sexy_Beauty Member MEMBER

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    The only word I know to speak when i glimpse at you is ****!
    the approach of your bodily movements towards me is like ****!
    my excitement escalades so extraordinarily high and i need to exhale
    cuz every movement you illustrate without the hindrance of words tips my scale
    the only verbal expressions I can say when you converse with me is ****!
    its like i unchain all my control and feelin’
    my mind is continuously unbalanced and reelin'
    **** boy even every minuscule action you do makes me hit the ceilin'
    how can one person single-handedly give me such a pleasurable feelin’?
    mmmm, mmmm, mmmm,
    all i can utter out as I intently gaze at you is ****!
    the sensuality you use to lure me is....
    is.....
    is.....
    ummmmm....
    nevermind....
    the only word I that i can ponder on and say as i love you is ****!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho ya love for the apple of ya eye
    tyte vibe of dizzzzzzzzammmmmmmm!!
     
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    ****!!! this is tight keep up the good work!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    1Sexy_Beauty

    Very nice....

    I can tell you had a lot of fun writing this one...it comes through in the tone of this piece...It makes me think of my poem "Them Blue Panties." :D :lol:

    Absolutely beautiful...great flow.

    :thanks: for sharing :D
     
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