Black Poetry : All I can feel is...(reverberation)

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stroke, push, stroke, push....

    The rhythm is repeated
    Over and over again
    My heart sounds like a drum beating
    Smooth flicks of the tongue
    Inspire me to give you what you need
    Big negroid lips that are increasingly
    Bringing my pleasure to an amazing release
    Until its hard to think
    And each
    One of my fingers feels like
    One thousand pounds of excessity
    But its really the cooch thats stressin me....
    Luscious vaginal juices intoxicate thee
    Mind sore from the feeling of intimacy
    "Put in work, make it hurt"
    Is all I can seem to think........

    *fade*

    DING DING DING!!!!!

    Stroke, push, stroke, push.....

    Time for Round Two baby!!!
    Lets get ready to rummmmmmmmmmble!!!!
    My bodyy shakes like thunder
    I look over my shoulder
    And all of a sudden
    Penetration turns my infatuation
    Into plain fornication
    Dayum, I thought this was supposed to be a conversation!
    Are you tellin me
    That I'm that easy to freak?
    Oh my goodness, just what has become of me?
    Don't wanna think too hard
    Cuz I'll ruin da fun
    So I'm gona go back to the start
    And play da innocent one
    Soon I pass into the fast lane
    But its startin to rain
    So dowwwwwwwnnnnn comes tha downpour
    Constantly tellin me you want more
    We have passed the empty land
    Of primitive sex play
    And entered the land of which we are one.....

    *fade*

    Stroke, push, stroke, push.....

    Dayum boy!!!
    Don't you ever get enough!!!
    I know its good, but that's just
    A lil too much!!!
    Sho nuff
    If I could
    I would
    Make love to you all night
    Until the point of ecstacy
    But boy I got a 9 to 5 waitin on me
    So just lay here and hold me
    And take your @ss to sleep!!

    I close my eyes and soon hear the light go....

    *click*

    Darkness engulfs me into a peaceful dreamless sleep......

    *yawn*

    And at 8
    Da next day
    My man got breakfast waitin on me.....
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :D i love this...reminds me of last nite......:angel1: lol
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :laugh: Play you are too much!!!!
    Dayum boy!!!
    Don't you ever get enough!!!
    I know its good, but that's just
    A lil too much!!!


    I loved this scribe...it made me laugh
     
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    woah! this is hot and on fire! dammm! loved it!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek: Lovely! oh lord...:x:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da way it should be ................loved this heated flow of bliss
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey! i can do that...i'm married!!!!:D:D:D
     
  8. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Play,

    WOW!! This is hot!! Great read!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    ****, quite a festive night...lol
    tyte @ss scribe
    fo sho
    peace
    khasm
     
  10. the_story

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    yo,gurl dis poem is off the hook,very hottttttt!
     
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