Black Poetry : ALL I ASK

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THE SWAN, Mar 28, 2004.

  1. THE SWAN

    THE SWAN Member MEMBER

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    Dont look in my eyes but see my heart
    Dont be sooo sublime & read my mind
    Live my life & hold my burdens the
    intense weight alone will punish you Im certain
    clap for my smiles
    and pray for my frowns
    hold my cold hands & catch the flu
    but only the strong will survive
    & it may or may not be you
    catch the paindrops as it begans to storm
    but feed me things like hope & encouragement to keep my mind warm
    Kiss me places you've only thought about
    tell me Im something you cant live without
    rub my back as if it were yours
    touch my face as if it were a rare diamond
    tell me things and Ill listen as if you were Simon
    Never let me go even if we are thousands of miles apart
    love me forever, whenever, however & through whatever
    is the key to my heart
    SAVING ME is NOT an option in this war as you would speak
    but FINDING ME is the mission
    in this game of hide & seek
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    no need to hide ....welcome within

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome the the new love place u found
    welcome from above as i bless dis piece some love
    tyte drop flow on as love is given as u give
    do visit our chat for classes//open mic poetry reading
    music// fun at www.destee.com/chat welcome !! :jumping:
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  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey welcome again
    tight drop
    flow on
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    with flows like these......
    can't hep but welcome you to the fam


    WELCOME :wave: :wave: :wave:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed this mellow flow. Welcome to destee. hope to read more from you!!!
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome again:wave:
    feeling the nice vibe
    in your scribe
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart: