Black Poetry : All for a man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daya, Mar 12, 2003.

  1. daya

    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You think you know all there is to know about a man. But guess what,all your doing is blowing smoke up your -------! Go ahead toot your own horn . Why not you were just born, I'm just waiting for the next 26 years to pass me by, So I can see more women cry,Don't you relize by now you can't change the path of a man They do what they know, And you they do not. So how can they do it right if you dont put up a fight. They won't see that their you'r Mr Destiny untill you show them that there is no love or honer in cheating just show how much you love and stay by his side. Don't ever let him see you cry, always have pride. Trust him always untill otherwise, don't be petty and call him out his name, just keep him close and one day he'll change and make you his wife. Dont disrespect him at all because the first time you do you'r house will fall.You'll get it right on day, But hay dont listen to me who's to say I know what I'm saying I could be wrong or I could be right but I have a good man that I will love for the rest of my life.
    I HOPE YOU LIKE MY POEM
    THANK'S DAYA
     
  2. daya

    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I THINK IT IS A VERY GOOD POEM
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    moving this to the poetry forum.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Daya

    If'n you gotz you a good one hang on to em' slim!

    Welcome to the Boards!
    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome Daya Welcome

    indeed u have depth in da pen
    nice flow continue and welcome
    to the family of Destee's playground :jumping: :wave: :wave: :wave: :jumping:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Welcome Daya

    I enjoyed the read and
    I look forward to reading more.
    Thanks for sharing.

    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    irresistable sentiments here!
    yo' man is lucky!
    Be blessed!
     
  8. daya

    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for you views
     
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    Daya sister.............
    i love you already..!..(by reading this poem)
    i think its a good one to......
    and a deep one actualy to!lol..(i mean it)
    hold on tight sweet.......to yo man....
    HE is lucky to have a queen as you..!
    god bless you both