Black Poetry : All Bullsh*ttin Aside

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Dec 15, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thought I told u
    that I love u, need u, want to
    hold u
    and even tho im not perfect I try to be for u
    becuz i care enough to try to bring more to
    the table
    even if I'm not able
    to buy u all the shiny things
    but I am capable
    of giving u the love you've never had, but desire
    but we've been going thru so much and im so tired
    but not tired of u, just the bullsh*t that we go thru
    I can never see myself w/o, but i can see ur ready to move on
    cuz u no longer put me 1st n sumthin tells me ur out gettin ur groove on
    but i cant be mad at that, I can only try to win u back
    but thats only if Im still in line for competition
    Just promise me that someone is not between the two of us, i couldnt take tha division
    I just need u tell me what u need from me instead of expectin me to know
    cuz baby lemme tell u, i'll never get the point unless u let it show
    u MIGHT get rich, but you'll definetly die trying
    so please stop for one minute, think about it, and I garauntee we'll grow
    Maybe I should let u walk away, but sumthin tells me ur waitin for my call
    I'm dialing up to ur heart, please answer the phone
    Cuz for a month now its been busy and Ive been feelin alone
    love is a two way street, so we're both to blame
    you've been acting weird and that only led me to roam
    doesnt mean its right, but it happened and its done
    i was told that life's a lesson and let me tell u i've been to school for months
    and i came up with this...
    i must be a fool, but at least im a fool in love. :spinn:
     
  2. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wooo, man, i can feel this one...like this one a lot...
    GOD BLESS :coffee:
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl, this is an honest scribe with an honest vibe. you have cleanly brought it to the table, and for that I give you props. nice flow, too.
     
  4. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved it! Took me back to a few sitiations ;) Can't wait to read more of you. Have really been missing out these past few months I see. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt ya release
    say it vent and flow on
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice out let...
    flow girl....
    likes this
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a serious drop sis
    feeling you on this
    let the flow
    release it all
    Peace
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the emotion was truly flowing from your pen on this one
    feeling it deeply....
    flow on girl!
     
  9. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Felt the honesty and emotion in this...nicely written.
     
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