Black Poetry : All About You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Aaliyahmonet, Jan 26, 2005.

  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U always think about yourself first
    What u want, what u gonna do,
    U say one thing, then do the opposite,
    What happened to us, i never did nothin wrong,
    I've been by your side for this long,
    All u can do is say "I",
    Like u ain't got no time,
    I thought u was my girl, but now i know why,
    U got time for everybody cept me,
    U never call me, or come see me,
    I see how u gone do me,
    It's funny to u, but it isn't,
    U don't care, now u lookin stupid,
    U was my friend,
    But u all about fun and games,
    "I" is just an excuse,
    Someone that cares about u and loves you,
    Got u a good job, and kept a roof over your head,
    And this is what i get,
    For all i had to go through and sacrifice,
    Makin sure u stay outta trouble,
    Getting a decent education and keepin u off tha street,
    But u gonna learn the hard way,
    Cause what goes around comes around,
    Now just wonder what'll happen,
    If that happened to you,
    It'll be all about you then right?


    Aaliyahmonet
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling the deep emotions here and the focus of ( i ) aways about one
    deep thoughts flowing openly release self
     
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    peace,

    true indeed.....though it is only a one letter word it can definitely cause some problems!

    enjoyed this piece.....

    peace
     
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    IlladelThug Active Member MEMBER

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    wow..i can relate to this one...emotional piece right here...feelin it
     
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    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i could really feel the emotion in this piece, we all encounter people like this in our life. great drop

    Lyr1c
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some folks are just plain selfish, no other way to describe it. This spoke out loud and clear. Flow on poet.