Black Haiku : Alive

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  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tears of the 3rd night
    Seriously keept live
    No sad descendents
     
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    Viewing diagnal
    Instant connection found tween
    Never wrong interp
     
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    alive
    filled with their blood
    walking the way they walked
    holding my head up connected
    hearing them when they speak
    saying, you ARE
    of me
     
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    My bag
    Load of ups
    Not going down though
    Going to make right now
    Please sun shine on my Home
    Open these eyes to view
    Where I come from
    The known track
    Not left
     
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    I Love your eintou poetry. My butt just wanta do it my way. I'm gonna get it right!:)
     
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    That is one of the things I love about you, sis
    and your style. you're gonna do you
    regardless of the rules.
     
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    homesick
    for home unknown
    are the stars the same there
    would feeling orphaned disappear
    would the wind speak my name
    please ancestors
    tell me
     
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    awesomely composed
     
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    Very nice
     
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    to become see'ers
    we need let the ancestors
    take their place within

    to guide our life force
    with the wisdom they instill
    in our mother wit

    hold close to our breasts
    the family and nature
    it's the way forward
     
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