Black Poetry : algebraic expression

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is this an algebraic expression?
    Cause her beauty was unequaled.
    Met her in my past life, so I guess it’s the sequel.
    She was my isosceles, perfect from all angles,
    except the angle of depression that had her heart in a strangle
    held firm by a tangle woven with lies and deceit,
    she tried to add love to the equation but the square wasn’t complete.
    Found a love to call her own, even mothered a remainder,
    but her opposite angle went off on a tangent with a stranger.
    Love number two expressed his affection with anger,
    playing his music of madness, and every note was a banger.
    Traded kisses for contusions using the substitution method,
    the problem couldn’t be factored, but not through lack of effort,
    so the shield was resurrected, defensive mechanisms intact,
    360 degrees of pain, but the radius wasn’t exact.
    She tried to blame herself, thinking somehow she deserved it,
    so she locked away her heart in an attempt to preserve it.
    She didn’t understand that the pervious cats were merely line segments,
    a definite beginning and end, not really a problem to have time spent.
    Then along came an equation with a complex structure,
    he had a familiar layout, but it was the changes that struck her.
    Everything she needed seemed to fit in his solution set,
    they knew each other for years but it was like they just met.
    She was afraid to except him as the answer to her problem,
    I guess there’s just too many variables for one man to solve em.
    Based solely on congruency, two lines would never meet,
    but with the slightest variation their connection will complete.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now u know i dig this piece and the depth it bring.....tyte write poet
     
  3. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo i was really feelin dis frum da heart
    dis drop remineded me of myself as a woman, i cud neva open up and let a bratha in my heart
    dis was on da real
    so flow on wit nonstop
    frum yo sistah G.A


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang!!!!!!!!!!!

    that was good :welldone:
     
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    tashatoya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey...

    This drop was beautiful... i like the way everything came together to solve the problem at the end... How wonderful! Mmmm, ur writing always hits the spot!
     
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    Nice poem.
    By the way, Tashatoya, where have you been?
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was beautiful, very creative, I enjoyed very much! :welldone:
     
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    Peace.

    Math never really was my thing, even when I channeled ancient wisdom into my dome. But this was the most beautiful problem I have ever seen.

    Much Love.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :SuN024:
    :qqb003:
    :em4400:
    :kick:

    This was so good!
    Mayn
    Real good ending!

    Desert Storm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hopefully that variation will be put into the equation, for perhaps their connection is the answer they've both been searching for. The detail was astounding.
     
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