Black Poetry : Al that i got right now is my Pen....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Jan 22, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mam is far..
    Dad is bizzy with brother......
    Gran is old and has to watch her healt.....
    Sister is busy with study...
    Sher is far and i have to watch my money to call......
    Blood sister is just breading from her Molesting ex.....
    Uncle was seeing making me progress dont want to dissepoint him..

    i need to talk ...and so all i got right now is my pen...
    I need to let my emotions out...
    i need to scream and shout...
    let it drop as blood drippeling out of my fingertops..

    I saw him ...
    I saw One of The voodo man Today...
    i almost had to trow up again..
    The last time he had the guts To come up to me and say...
    I,m sorry ....
    and said you my sister will you forgive me....
    SISTER SISTER SISTER!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????????
    Forgive! ????? Forgive?????
    For Sirritual drug me and than wanted to attac me to penetrade ME!!!!!!!!!!!
    For wanting to Voodo me!..
    WHILE I WAS LOOKING FOR HELP...
    LIKE A WEAK SHEEP PREPARING TO BE SLAUGHTERED...

    You know why you ask that question !!!!!!!!!
    because you know what i am capeble of if i dont forgive....
    MAn you are on youre own You and god..
    Lets keep it with that....
    No no revenge.....
    But stay away from me...
    and even if i forgive that does not mean i have to TALK WITH YOU!...
    I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN !!
    STAY OUT OF MY SIGHT!......




    I warned him to move out of my sight ....
    How can he ...
    How He has the Guts !!!!!!!! to come and speak to me...

    Lord please...
    Let these mond go fast...
    until i move..
    Let me leave this place envoirement full of horrible memories
    in that periode..
    i,m tired of fighting...
    I,m tired of crying..
    my body is tired...
    i want to move on..
    in better words..
    i want to rest.....
     
  2. Kwegan

    Kwegan Member MEMBER

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    I love your writing style especially your format and the flow and consistancy of the piece...really nice.
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U have U under control.

    Keep letting it out, my mind hears U loud & clear.

    I'm diggin' it.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    i likes this one
    flow on release....
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed u do control self
    flow on dis was awesome
    ya pen on a new wave indeed
    wow
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling you on this scribe...release it in the flow
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa

    Liberty sister you have released some very heavy words and feelings into this scribe, much love to you and your work. But now youhave your pen and your destee fam! ;)
     
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