Black Poetry : Ak ROW nyM

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CON vo luted
    mind TAN gled WEBS
    ENtrap THE clearly
    THINking...
    ...
    .P.U.L.L.I.N.G
    them into catastrophe
    CAT is TRO phIK
    anti-THIN KING
    into THIN KING that
    this is an AK ROW NYM

    or is it just some BulL...man...URe
    written as a LINE to
    this piece to be sniffed
    NOT serVING any purpose but
    to MAKE 1 thINK
    abOUT geTTIng hiGH
    on Poetry OR
    just PON DER
    beYOND the dots betwEEn
    the L+E+T+T+E+R+S=letters

    P........oetry
    U........................nderstands
    ....L.....LOVE....
    L.......................ingering
    ......I.....n....
    .....................N....ights
    G......arment

    ....A...
    ..............h
    ..h
    .....h
    .........h
    .................H

    the smoke traipses from
    the "blown out by the bodily sigh"
    wick / and sketches you ME ME you
    U.M. U.M (good)
    in nights sarong
    wrapped A rounD
    ouR bodies
    and Square MINDS
    that box in

    two collectiVE frames
    of THOUGHT leaVING us
    AS a pAINTing hanging
    at the end of our
    AK ROW NYM

    that mean nothing
    but

    L.O.V.E

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB

    i don't know if i'm going crazy

    cause i understand your work

    this is all that man

    you hit the 2 extreme of 2 parallels

    peace to my fellow soldier in the struggle
     
  3. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow

    this 'peace' is LOVE!!!:heart:

    tight as usual!!:wink:
     
  4. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    W.o.W

    LiKe whoa Nelly !
    off the hook
    SYNchroNIZing like a stop watch
    I felt the R.Y.T.H.Y.M in this one
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha and Afri,

    Queens of Destee and eternity thank you.

    Street,

    My brother in the struggle...Thanks blak man. We have to drop a collab, sumthin' revolutionary

    one love ya'll,blak
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    This is definitely
    a sharp piece!

    Nicely hand-woven material...
     
  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    repostrepost
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Man the doors u just open ....
    tyte drop of lyrics man
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my brotha my brotha
    this was way tight
    just off it.....
    flow on........
    feelin ya vibe.... :angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just creatively wonderful...keep that flow going.